death alley

by sacreir

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Description

You are John Hayes, and it has been so long you have lost track of time...you're still in the god forsaken city,you have brought several survivors of the tradgedy to your safehouse, and fortified it with the neccesary guns, ammo, food, water, and supplies for emergency repairs.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 6 - i'll need to see some identification
Story Difficulty: 5 - run through the jungle
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 10 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 66 times and finished 11 times since 8/3/2008

Comments

It's awesome!!!

-- koolgai (Score of 500)
10/7/2008 8:28:21 PM:

Not bad. Not bad at all. You did a nice job incorporating variables and items. But, uh, why is a pistol/revolver better than a katana? Katanas are made the strongest steel in the world! I mean, just call it a pocket knife or something. Whatever, just a stupid nit-pick. Anyway, great job.

-- Anubis (Score of 0)
8/16/2008 10:22:38 PM:

2/8. There is no point to your items, because you can lie and say you have a sniper, shotgun or magnum. The plot needs to be re-thought, the grammar licked ape nuts, and you need to think about ways to make your items a little more important and useful.

Kisses,
DS :)

-- deadly_sinner66 (Score of 0)
8/12/2008 5:25:52 PM:

It was interesting, but it dropped you in with no explanation, like, "Yeah, it's a post-apocalyptic story, whatever." The swearing, to me, seemed unnecessary and out-of-place, as well as many pages. I know you were trying to be funny, but it seemed forced. It might help if you fix it so that the player can only take one weapon a day to add strategy. Also, I ended on a password, so I got the impression that you said, "Yeah, it's not finished, but I can't wait to publish it so I won't." Also, a spellcheck is in order. It might also be nice to manage and talk to all the survivors that you've gathered, command them to forage for food, join your monster hunt, etc., but maybe I'm getting a little too in-depth. Interesting system, but in its current state, even you have admitted that it's a joke. We'll have to wait for the sequel.

-- Melike (Score of 0)
8/5/2008 5:17:15 AM:

Potential is there.
I think the organization and systems need work.
The path I took (that lead to the ending with the password) had a half-decent story, although it was all skin and bones. Your vocabulary was decent but your spelling and grammar was a little on the weak side -- not terrible.
So for organization and systems. Never ever have a link that breaks the wall between real and story (IE: I want to kill the narrator). And there should never be pages that say "click the link." Those are all avoidable things. Also, it had so much potential with: "Kills better at short range" etc. That could have been awesome, but instead I never got to use weapons and all the battles were linear.
Oh yeah, and capitalize your title.

-- JJJ-thebanisher (Score of 0)
8/5/2008 3:44:19 AM:

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