Your quest around Rhode island

by Simpsons

Description

This game is about Rhode Island. Journey about it, in a new and exciting plot!

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 6 - i'll need to see some identification
Game Difficulty: 6 - wandering through the desert
Play Length: 5 - Not going to lose any sleep
Player Rating: 3 - choose your own boredom (based on 15 ratings)
Played 44 times and finished 7 times since 2/19/2007

Comments

I appreciate the length, and partly the effort, but there is much room for improvement. Read the last few comments, I'm afraid if I said something I would be repeating them.

-- October (Score of 0)
11/12/2007 1:52:26 AM:

"What nutbrians"
I stepped on a trap and all the blood fell out of me. . .
Your descriptive writing was interesting, and it definitely felt like it took more than 15 minutes to write, but it was still more of a narrative than an actual CYOA. A few more choices that affect the outcome of the game in ways other than death would be nice, too.

-- Sethaniel (Score of 0)
4/20/2007 10:21:46 PM:

I like the plane ticket item and appreciate the length of the story. However, there are too many spelling and grammatical errors. Also, the story doesn't make a lot of sense - it's nice to get the character involved in a grand plot, but the reader can only suspend so much disbelief. It was peculiar that suddenly I have a Dodge Viper, as well as other things that appeared and weren't mentioned before. You need to edit and revise this story and rethink how the character could be involved in this plot - why exactly would these terrorists be after him?

-- madglee (Score of 0)
1/18/2007 4:12:43 PM:

Grammar needs to be taken care of, linear, and storyline is a bit...dull...and confusing. It could be a good game, if you had fix these parts. Next time, try harder.

-- Cake (Score of 0)
1/15/2007 6:24:18 PM:

Why are terrorists out to get you? How does poison kill you in one bite of food?

Also, the game was too linear too be considered any real fun. Not to mention, it was more or less reading a book, with a few pages that can be skipped.

Try to branch out a little. Add in some puzzles. Everyone else is probably going to choose the same exact path. There is no escaping that if you play this.

Oh, and the descriptions on some pages were a bit lacking. Nice pictures though.

-- Havacoman (Score of 0)
1/14/2007 3:21:04 PM:

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