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Tags: Serious

Description

You have America's future in your hand. You are a brave indian warrior. Little Sparrow is your friend, a girl who wants to save the village from pale faces. She will befriend a brave pale face. She'll help you on your journey too. You must stop the war. Will you fail or suceed? It's your choice. Free the land and win a war, or will you spy on the pale faces? will you have a certain death, or a certain sucess find out in THE WHITE FACE.

Stats

 (on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 4 - need to be accompanied by an adult
Story Difficulty: 6 - wandering through the desert
Play Length: 3 - A nice jog down the driveway
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 26 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 120 times and finished 28 times since 9/9/2007

Comments

Karma is not a Native American thing.
-- NeverMind
1/28/2012 3:43:06 PM:
good?
-- Killer999
9/22/2011 11:16:47 AM:
It's a good concept but I feel like it needs to be fleshed out more.
-- Melike
1/2/2009 4:15:17 PM:
Even though the paragraphs were large and I see you've spent some time writing, the many grammatical errors make it look like you rushed. Take your time, develop the story more, and remember to go back and edit. It's an excellent idea, but there's room for improvement.
-- Anubis
1/2/2009 2:51:54 PM:
this was shorter than taking a pee. it seemed like a good idea but not enough effort put into it.
-- deadly_sinner66
11/23/2007 2:15:18 AM:

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