The Unwritten Jedi

by NealShustermanFan

Tags: Demo, Serious

Description

This is the story of Gabri Joo, a young Jedi Padawan. He torn between his loyality for the Jedi and for the power of the Sith. Will he stay a Jedi and save the galaxy? Or will be be drawn into the Sith's power-hungry grasp? It's up to you. May the Force be with you.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 2 - choking hazard for children under 4
Story Difficulty: 2 - walk in the park
Play Length: 3 - A nice jog down the driveway
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 14 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 220 times and finished 18 times since 5/20/2009

Comments

I really liked the descriptions you had in the story. There were some things lacking though.

1) It was really short(But if this was your first attempt at a story this is understandable)
2) There was no buildup. Things happened way to quickly.
3) I wish there were more options for me to choose from.

If you improve on some of the things I mentioned I am sure you will create a great story. Keep trying!!

-- JMgskills
11/16/2011 5:22:56 PM:

I think it had enough story to make up for few choices.

-- cool74
6/7/2011 1:10:36 AM:

acceptable

-- Killer999
5/17/2011 11:45:50 AM:

Moved to Fan Fiction.

-- JJJ-thebanisher
9/3/2010 1:15:46 AM:

Shouldn't this be in FF?

-- Jeff
9/3/2010 12:48:34 AM:

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