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Stories > Mystery / Puzzle > The Murder Mystery
DescriptionMeet Mike, a twenty-seven year old. He was a happily married husband, with a great job, until one day, his wife is discovered dead, nobody knows how. Mike must now go through different possbilites with the situation, any way he can. It could go from one extreme to the next, easy or hard as it is, to find out the truth about the death to his wife, Karen This was spell checked, right before the release... It is my first story. So I'm just adjusting to make stories. Everyone who sees this, please read, and enjoy!
Stats(on a scale of 1 to 8)
Maturity Level: 4 - need to be accompanied by an adult |
Comments
A good story but not very many options
-- betaband (Score of 0)
5/12/2012 5:46:36 PM:
I idn't read most of it. I just looked at the choices. Too long.... But really good, and awesome story. Ending was sad though. Awesome Approves 5/10
-- awesomeness1242 (Score of 0)
5/5/2012 12:24:36 PM:
Confused
-- CovElite (Score of 0)
4/24/2012 10:37:41 PM:
It was great. Really the kind of story I like. It's the whole atmosphere of the story that I can't describe other than: "it's the atmosphere of the story".
-- SindriV (Score of 0)
4/20/2012 6:15:12 PM:
Meh, while you have (almost) perfect spelling, I think the way you worded the story hung me.
-- Swiftstryker (Score of 0)
2/29/2012 8:03:25 PM: |