The Fire

by melissa543001

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Description

In this game you will have to use you brain to get out, any wrong turn and you and your friends will die. Be the hero, or, just be a kid caught in the fire.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 1 - appropriate for all ages
Story Difficulty: 4 - march in the swamp
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 14 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played times and finished times since (N/A - Not Published)

Comments

Short, boring, and badly written.

-- Unknown
2/18/2011 12:09:50 AM:

there were a lot of grammar errors, but other than that it's a good story. you could've used better imagery or just a better descritption though

-- fergie14233
12/15/2010 9:49:58 PM:

Good. Imaginative.

-- NealShustermanFan
7/16/2009 5:18:08 PM:

I have to say, this story goes beyond linear. This story is linear in a whole new, twisted way. Never before have I seen such hideously dull choices, and outcomes sometimes completely removed from them.

The story also seemed to force the reader through one path through many choices leading back to the same thing. It would have been better to just eliminate those choices than provide the illusion.

Finally, although you tried to make some kind of connection between the characters, with development amounting to: "you like her", I just thought: I don't give a shit, ESPECIALLY since your character has no choice but to be romantically inclined, yet you provide the illusion of that choice.

Finally, not saving some emotionless romantic figure does not condemn one to a life of loneliness. I'm sorry, that's just flawed logic there.

-- Rommel
1/2/2009 9:09:58 PM:

Wow. I really liked it! And I got out in the end without dying! YAYYYYYY!

-- goosebumpsreader
1/2/2009 3:58:37 PM:

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