The Devil's Fire

by Ashen_Snake

Description

EDITS: Dead End fixed? Past Tense turned into present. Note: Kay', I fixed what I could see... but that's all I'll fix now (Unless you point out where another problem is). I can't get into correcting every little grammar error, nor can I fix the Julian/Bana thing. Why? Well, because I'm soooo busy making this into an actual novel. Maybe you'll want to buy it? Wait--damn it, you already know the whole thing! Crap. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it, if you haven't played it yet.

The Devil's Act - an event in history carried out by one man that obliterated three entire states. Bana-Jxo has been leading a rather undercover life after what he'd done, but when the government starts sending out his own kind to kill him, he gets into a crux that uncovers just when all went wrong. Now, Bana must figure out the secrets of the Zempaph people, and protect newly found comrades in the process...

"The first rule to remember, Julian, is that pain is a gift to lead to a better tommorrow... A bittersweet gift, but still a gift."

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 5 - aren't you a little to old to be trick or treating
Game Difficulty: 4 - march in the swamp
Play Length: 7 - It keeps going and going
Player Rating: 7 - even better than Reeses' Cups® (based on 14 ratings)
Played 75 times and finished 4 times since 8/19/2007

Comments

i cant even describe how fantastic it is! It is really good.
8/8 for me.

-- snowvioletjadecat (Score of 0)
3/22/2008 11:08:22 AM:

That was an incredibly written story, with great use of the advanced editor, with items, stats, and stuff! Very well put together. I'm not sure what else to say. Top score.

-- tsmpaul (Score of 0)
12/4/2007 1:31:22 AM:

A nicely written story with some problems with tenses as many have said. I like the poetry at the beginnings of the chapters and the pics go well. I also thought the complexity of the stories and characters was very well done. Great use of items. That said, I felt that the writing was surprisingly less advanced than your other story, and that confused me. I suspected you wrote it over a period of years which would contribute to some of the flow problems, and you confirmed that where I got the best ending. Still, excellent work!

-- madglee (Score of 0)
8/4/2007 4:37:13 PM:

all i can say is wow

-- doraiscrap777 (Score of 0)
7/13/2007 4:03:44 PM:

Fantastic. That's all I can say... 8/8

-- Rommel (Score of 0)
7/11/2007 11:08:00 PM:

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