The Carivelli Carnival

by jessicacane34

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Description

The Carivelli Carnival hides it's true nature from most of it's customers, but to a select and unlucky few it holds a fate far worse than anything imaginable...

Are you ready to visit the carnival?

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 5 - aren't you a little to old to be trick or treating
Story Difficulty: 5 - run through the jungle
Play Length: 5 - Not going to lose any sleep
Player Rating: 5 - not the best, certainly not the worst (based on 25 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 351 times and finished 23 times since 7/7/2011

Comments

Pretty good.

-- Killer999
9/2/2011 9:30:48 AM:

Awesome

-- Jon
7/13/2011 1:51:03 PM:

I went through the story 100% i saw every page it had to offer as far as I can tell. This is a good story, and has only a small number of typos. Its also very much so non-linear. An excellent job on that. Most of the endings leave a little something to be desired, but all in all, an excellent story.

-- ugilick
7/12/2011 7:50:43 PM:

It was an interesting story, but I noticed a few errors, here are two from one page (because I can't remember most of them :)) "even with a great amount of practice and patients.
He let's " In that quote, "patients" is spelled patience, and "let's" should just be lets, otherwise it says "let us". I know that those are actual words, so the upcoming solution won't actually work for those, but a little tip is to write your pages on word, then copy and paste to the editor, that way it will both let you know your errors and if the system fails while downloading it to the editor you won't lose your progress.

-- ThisisBo
7/8/2011 8:42:00 PM:

Well that was disturbing

-- urnam0
7/7/2011 6:57:12 PM:

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