The Bus of Doom

by VinegarTaffy

Description

You're on a bus. Get to the last stop ALIVE! You must survive the attacks of mayonnaise sandwiches, hijacking squirrels, and bottle cap-wielding maniacs!

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 5 - aren't you a little to old to be trick or treating
Game Difficulty: 4 - march in the swamp
Play Length: 1 - Make sure not to blink
Player Rating: 3 - choose your own boredom (based on 26 ratings)
Played 79 times and finished 31 times since 8/19/2007

Comments

5/8. Interesting concept. Maybe, instead of ending the game when you die, restart.

-- Expander
12/26/2007 1:50:33 PM:

Interesting for a first game. You might want to incorporate more options and branch them out so that you will get a longer story. Don't include too many death pages!

-- GodsSlayer
11/17/2007 5:45:16 AM:

Very interesting idea.

-- weedy
10/14/2007 10:48:57 PM:

Lol, like everyone said this is really linear, but it's pretty good for a first story. Your writing style is clean and I laughed out loud when fatty exploded part of the bus. Write some more.

-- madglee
9/3/2007 7:42:56 AM:

I realise that the story was intended to be humorous, but it's really frustrating to try and read a story only to get two sentences and a lame punchline. I'd rather read the washing directions on my underwear.

-- donteatpoop
8/31/2007 10:56:42 PM:

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