Terra Proxima: The Lines are Drawn

by Rommel

Tags: Part of Series, RPG, Serious, War

Description

Terra Proxima, an Epic Choose Your Own Adventure Serial by Rommel

Episode 2: The Lines are Drawn

Here it is! See the world through Sentinel's eyes as you fight the Taktat Empire's invasion to a standstill, and realise that this is just the beginning of what is to come...

Includes the epilogue, Terra Proxima: Hostile Contact, which is rather lengthly and non-branching, but I think it provides good closure.

I have not playtested this - I figure it's better to release now and fix it up later.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 4 - need to be accompanied by an adult
Story Difficulty: 4 - march in the swamp
Play Length: 8 - Even light has to break at the rest stop
Player Rating: 7 - even better than Reeses' Cups® (based on 23 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 427 times and finished 27 times since 7/14/2010

Comments

to long pages and the choices required nothing but clicking and not needing the items

-- schrojan (Score of 0)
1/29/2012 5:39:47 PM:

That was great

-- ThisisBo (Score of 0)
11/21/2011 5:08:57 PM:

really good.

-- Killer999 (Score of 0)
6/8/2011 12:19:07 PM:

Awesome...

-- joshdragon (Score of 0)
1/21/2011 8:49:26 PM:

Masterful work. The preview I had built up high expectations for me, but you still managed to blow them out of the water. This episode takes what made the original great and expands on it in spades. Every time I thought the episode was ready to wind down, another high caliber battle sparked. Then there is the incredibly lengthy epilogue. Each encounter tests judgment and resource management skills. Every item and event has a purpose. Nothing is wasted. This tight decision making integrated with a war story that has excellent backstory and character development in this episode, page after page after page, makes for an experience worthy of the highest praise. I cannot imagine a worthier addition to the series, but you have a better imagination than I do.

-- Melike (Score of 0)
8/24/2010 7:46:26 AM:

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