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Description

The people of Azrya live in fear. An evil group of wizards, that call themselves The Black Veil, hold the country in an iron grip. Their leader: Sarces, singlehandedly killed the previous king and his royal guards. When all hope is lost, a small light appears in the darkness. A hero is born ...

 

I know that this isn't a masterpiece, but this just my first story and I'm not a native speaker of English so advice or comments are welcomed.

Stats

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Maturity Level: 5 - aren't you a little to old to be trick or treating
Story Difficulty: 3 - trek through the forest
Play Length: 5 - Not going to lose any sleep
Player Rating: 5 - not the best, certainly not the worst (based on 29 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 73 times and finished 6 times since 2/27/2012

Comments

ok
-- anon
5/15/2012 9:49:29 PM:
It was really good. But a picture of the dark wizard would have been helpful, or any other photos to describe the scene/people. All in all it was really good.
-- SEULaw
3/5/2012 10:13:19 PM:
A very interesting take on the fantasy adventure gamestyle. The options felt a little limited, but that didn't detract from the story at all. They felt more like snap decisions, which was reflected through the story.
-- MrCraiggy
3/1/2012 8:31:12 AM:
Excellent story that end in a well though out ending.
-- Nightmare
12/21/2011 1:59:08 PM:
I really liked it. I liked the well developed action scenes and the detail of the story. The only thing that I would suggest is that you use pictures to help describe characters/surroundings, etc. Other than that, great job!!
-- JMgskills
10/14/2011 3:51:29 PM:

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