Puppet without strings

by maheusz

Tags: Serious, Socially Important, War

Description

It's XXIII century, humankind has long ago reached stars. But it's not golden age. Space is harsh master and so we become like it - cold, ruthless and effective. New society was created, new kind of people. Like anthill all we have are our roles to fulfill. Nothing more.

You are one of the War Marionettes - brainwashed humans with technical upgrades who are bound to obey every order of their masters. 'Normal' people call you 'puppets'. Still, you are very special kind of puppet - experimental model. And your foreboding name is Thirteen...

Hint:

*ALWAYS first collect items as some of them are needed for game to function properly

*this is a first part of a series, I may be writing more soon

* and yes - you can get killed here pretty quickly...

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 4 - need to be accompanied by an adult
Story Difficulty: 5 - run through the jungle
Play Length: 6 - It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®
Player Rating: 5 - not the best, certainly not the worst (based on 13 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 210 times and finished 17 times since 7/13/2010

Comments

I couldn't understand it at all. It seemed like a good story but I was so confused. Need to write better english.

-- bradhal (Score of 0)
11/11/2011 5:04:07 PM:

Amazing plot. The writing was a bit off, but overall great job.

-- Killer999 (Score of 0)
5/20/2011 11:21:40 AM:

Really cool story idea. I enjoyed it a lot, even if the grammar was a little bad. I'm guessing English is your second language, so well done.

-- October (Score of 0)
3/28/2011 7:22:47 AM:

i was confused half the time and you had a few mispelled words.

-- fergie14233 (Score of 0)
8/14/2010 2:19:19 PM:

Your storyline is really well thought out and awesome. Your execution is poor because the writing is incoherent. You're missing words and your grammar is terrible. Is English your second language? If so, this is an absolutely awesome story. I gave it a 5 because I really love the storyline. Just as a side note, I don't think this is long enough to warrant splitting it off into a sequel. Generally, as a rule of thumb, a story should be about 200 pages long before that's even thought of.

-- JJJ-thebanisher (Score of 0)
8/9/2010 6:54:44 PM:

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