Project Lovecraft

oh, the horror!
It's the genre where there are no happy endings, at least not that I could find. Fair enough.

Not bad.

One thing really jumped out at me. The beginning mentioned being a WW2 officer. However, when you time-travel you mention the year you left was 1919. That's 1 year after WW1 ended and WW2 doesn't kick off until 1939.

Like I said, overall not bad. It would have been nice to see more creative touches with the other paths besides being railroaded into the same choices (you can loop prying your leg free).

Satisfactory enough. I changed it to Fan-Fiction as it relies wholly or in part on existing works that are not the author's.

For future reference, it's considered pretty bad form to not include an End Game link after every ending. People really dislike having to click back through the whole story to be able to rate and comment.

I haven't read the short story myself so some of the differences between asterisked and non-asterisked paths were lost on me. Nevertheless, the story is not bad.

Solid branching, SPAG, and writing, and reads like a pretty standard CYOA. Not too shabby.