Priesthood

by Jimson

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Description

A man, A child, A women, A secret.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 6 - i'll need to see some identification
Story Difficulty: 5 - run through the jungle
Play Length: 5 - Not going to lose any sleep
Player Rating: 5 - not the best, certainly not the worst (based on 13 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 87 times and finished 16 times since 8/6/2008

Comments

It's ok.

-- koolgai (Score of 0)
9/11/2008 9:47:01 PM:

Great story!

-- Anubis (Score of 0)
8/12/2008 3:21:16 PM:

It had an intresting plot line, but many gramatical and punctual errors

-- realprety (Score of 0)
8/11/2008 7:57:16 PM:

I must say Thank you to MirrorMask for Doing IMO the best review I have ever gotten.

-- Jimson (Score of 0)
8/7/2008 4:13:35 PM:

I have not read many stories on this site, so I cannot really compare this to anything else.
However, I was asked to read and comment, and so I shall.
I see that many others have rated this highly, with enthusiastic praise, and I am sorry, but I am unable to give such a glowing recommendation.
The writing is very sloppy, with many spelling mistakes and little care for grammar or sentence structure.
There seems to be an attempt on your part to use a large, complex vocabulary, however "vestigeal" is not a word, and if you meant "vestigial" then you have used it incorrectly.
I do not find the story particularly original or unique, but you do seem to have made an effort.
Are you a child? In that case, I would give you high marks for the attempt.
Overall, it is the writing of someone who has been told by others that they possess skill, but not someone who has consistently honed their craf

-- Mirrormask (Score of 0)
8/7/2008 3:15:03 PM:

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