Missing in Action

by lisaves

Tags: Based Off A True Story, Serious, War

Description

A story about friendship and survival.

This is lisaves' first storygame.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 3 - must be at least this tall to play
Story Difficulty: 3 - trek through the forest
Play Length: 5 - Not going to lose any sleep
Player Rating: 5 - not the best, certainly not the worst (based on 21 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 231 times and finished 22 times since 10/5/2010

Comments

I found it a boring storyline. I would also have liked a better description so i knew what it was about before it started.

-- bradhal (Score of 0)
9/5/2011 10:58:47 AM:

I wasn't impressed. The game didn't really have a point to it, just people in a cave.

-- deadly_sinner66 (Score of 0)
5/24/2011 3:24:06 PM:

Not the ending I was expecting. I enjoyed reading it.

-- v8 (Score of 0)
10/7/2010 7:46:02 PM:

This is an interesting story (autobiographical?) with both pros and cons:
Pros:
1. Good narrative, with emotional payoffs and character development, ending tying into earlier parts of story
2. Some of the descriptions were really good, like the caves
Cons:
1. Grammar mistakes or simply an informal, stream-of-consciousness style that can disorient the reader due to lack of structure
2. Linear
The consequence of you choosing/declining to help the guy with his exhaust could have been done better with variables and inside the story, without taking the reader outside of the story
Overall, an inconsistent but sometimes brilliant first effort.

-- urnam0 (Score of 0)
10/6/2010 10:46:18 PM:

(Continued) BEST writers on this site and he barely ever puts anything in the description page.

So, I had to replay through the story to give you the second part of this comment and MAN, the part where you end the story because I kill some spiders is really really stupid. Don't give us the choice to do something and then tell us we're a sadist for doing it. That's breaking one of the primary rules of CYOAing.

Still though, good attempt. Build on it.

-- JJJ-thebanisher (Score of 0)
10/5/2010 11:57:17 PM:

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