Mind Games

by bradhal

Tags: Humor, Puzzle, Serious, Socially Important, War

Description

There is a threat in the wider world. Its closer than you think. In fact it could be around you right now. No don't bother looking for it. It's more subtle than that. It can hide itself very well. This is a story about them. Good luck.

Authors notes:

Items are automatically used, you don't need to use them, just having them on you is enough. However if you're stuck you might want to look at the description.

Score is displayed at the end when you comment, its not displayed throughout.

I spent a great deal of time on this and I hope you enjoy.

First published 5:45PM, 6th of May 2011

Republished 5:10PM, 11th of May 2011

Minor spelling fixed, minor plot holes fixed . Made the puzzle section easier for those who are stuck.

Also I removed the extra spaces that some people complained about. I apologise to those who had a saved game when I unpublished it.

Republished 5.37PM, 12th of May 2011

Fixed a bug.

Oh and the true story tag is a joke on my behalf. You will see what I mean if you finish it .

Story idea taken from animorphs, which I have adapted into my own and made it unique.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 3 - must be at least this tall to play
Story Difficulty: 6 - wandering through the desert
Play Length: 6 - It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®
Player Rating: 5 - not the best, certainly not the worst (based on 22 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 136 times and finished 10 times since 9/5/2011

Comments

i wanted a happier ending but this was really good

-- DarkentityOni (Score of 20)
11/8/2011 6:00:03 PM:

This game was complicated but not a whole lot of fun. After the part where you combine items, there really isn't much to to the story. I would attempt to make it longer and more detailed, maybe give some of the combinations pictures. 4/8.

-- deadly_sinner66 (Score of 100)
5/24/2011 2:05:49 PM:

Yeah, so this is all just a fairly direct ripoff of Animorphs. Disappointed by the lack of credit given to that series of books, this borders on plagiarism. I mean, literally, everything from the composition of the aliens to the way the aliens plan to take over to the way the aliens are numbered and ranked is taken directly from there. The technical aspects of the story were just terrible, you messed up tense and spelling on many occasions. The scope of the infestation and the personal level of dedication to infect me all made no sense.

-- JJJ-thebanisher (Score of 20)
5/21/2011 4:08:14 AM:

I-WON-I-WON-I-WON-I-WON-I-WON-I-WON-I-WON-I-WON!!! I LOVE IT!!

-- Alavander (Score of 100)
5/14/2011 5:54:13 PM:

The only slight pity I have for this story is that it should have been longer. I feel that the ending was a little abrupt. A story with a great idea like this should be more developed. Nevertheless, a job well done! I would be looking forward to see more of your stories.

Btw, try not to put in spaces for your punctuations, it can get a little distracting.

-- Crefix (Score of 100)
5/7/2011 1:30:20 AM:

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