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Stories > Fantasy Adventure > In the Caverns

Tags: Serious, War

Description

The kingdoms Malish and Groga are caught in a horrible war. Ten Malishian warriors have been captured, imprisoned, and tortured by a horde of Grogaians. You, also a Malishian warroir, has come to their rescue. There are two main endings and, hopefully, I'll prepare a sequel for both. Now, go into the caverns and free your fellow Malishians.

Stats

 (on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 3 - must be at least this tall to play
Story Difficulty: 3 - trek through the forest
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 3 - choose your own boredom (based on 32 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 187 times and finished 36 times since 7/13/2009

Comments

too short
-- SEULaw
11/17/2011 4:13:01 AM:
I thought the game was a little rushed. You didn't get to know the actual situation that much, too short in my opinion
-- Firefly
9/11/2011 8:34:57 AM:
It had potential but was cut short. 4/8
-- RiterOfWrandom
7/4/2011 9:17:08 PM:
Bo dissaproves, feel the shame wash over you
-- ThisisBo
5/10/2011 9:39:17 PM:
I like how you began the story with the main character not at his best health, but I do wish I knew what his hardships were ahead of time to figure out how he came to be this way. Also, I felt more like I was reading a book rather than getting to choose anything; it was too linear. Also, it isn't that realistic that you would really try to eat a rat whole. First, if it as really a rat and not a mouse, you might not even be able to fit the entire thing in your mouth. Then trying to swallow the fur and bones was rather unrealistic. Biting the meat off and eating it raw, sure, but not even a starving person would swallow it whole. Logically, pulling it apart and eating the meat would be the bit more logical choice.
The story was pretty good, though, since you could understand how your surroundings felt; I just wish it was a bit longer.
-- jkulibert2
4/26/2011 6:12:34 PM:

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