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by Jimson
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Description

This game is DREADFULLY SHORT Sorry about that I got to fed up with the Variables and what not, and at somepoint it wouldn't save my work I had JUST DONE so I had to leave all the windows open, There was another chapter But the server went down so I kind of gave up on it, Be looking for a number 2 if you liked this one, I might even Do a good job XD

 

 

Your Gf is making you clean the house, Will you find a way to weasel out... Or will you get all the work done?

Uses some advanced aspects.

The game isn't all that bad as a  7 but there are a few vague mentions of sex acts and I thought it would be best to be safe.

Make sure you Leave in your comments if theres any glitches, Btw please do not attempt to use the Items when you Clean but click the links, and only click once please for some reason I set up the Use limit and still they continuously show up.

Stats

 (on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 7 - anything goes
Story Difficulty: 2 - walk in the park
Play Length: 2 - So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe
Player Rating: 3 - choose your own boredom (based on 13 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 82 times and finished 12 times since 6/3/2008

Comments

Well... I've seen worse. I mean, the story is pointless, but whatever.
-- Anubis (Score of 1)
8/12/2008 3:19:32 PM:
This was quite enjoyable for being such a short and easy game. The quality of writing contributed much to its overall success. There must be a way you could space out the paragraphs or sentences to make it easier to read, though.
-- Mirrormask (Score of 2)
8/11/2008 3:44:25 PM:
Interesting to look into the lives of people like this, but clean-up is definitely in order. (Ironic, right?) Try google images for the items and brush up on the more advanced aspects of storygame creation for more finesse in the finished product.
-- Melike (Score of 2)
8/3/2008 2:44:31 AM:
Good Effort! You're on your way. Check out the articles under HELP & INFO. Seriously, they will help you.

http://www.chooseyourstory.com/help/articles/
-- JJJ-thebanisher (Score of 1)
7/2/2008 5:43:47 AM:
I like the fact that the whole story is about cleaning. I think I'll go clean my apartment some more now. Nice work with the variables, but like Seth said, now that you've tested them out you can make items that work.
-- madglee (Score of 3)
6/8/2008 3:43:17 AM:

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