Desperate Heart

by Corinthian

Description

A boy and a girl in a shattered land.

In this world, there can be no chance for happy endings.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 7 - anything goes
Game Difficulty: 1 - no possible way to lose
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 7 - even better than Reeses' Cups® (based on 21 ratings)
Played 111 times and finished 20 times since 7/18/2008

Comments

Immediately draws you in and doesn't stop. This is a story that doesn't need to be long. I did a double-take to be sure I wasn't reading something by Seth.

-- Melike (Score of 0)
8/3/2008 2:58:38 AM:

:) Very good! I liked it a lot, and I even laughed once or twice at the choices... But, it really was more of a story then a storygame... I think that, even though the choices didn't do much to affect the story, that you could've at least added more choices near the end, but there are a quite a few pages where you only get one option.

Still, it drew me in and I felt like I was there. O.O You witch! I mean... 7/8 Keep it up. :D

-- Zero (Score of 0)
8/1/2008 11:37:46 AM:

Innovative. Only problem is choices have no effect in the long run until at the end.

-- primates (Score of 0)
8/1/2008 10:15:02 AM:

lol ok, so lets get this straight DS66. Nothing to critique, so it's perfect, but it only gets a 7/8?

It got a 7 out of 8, merely because it lacked length--from me. Oh and a certain tenta---

-- JJJ-thebanisher (Score of 0)
7/31/2008 3:37:10 AM:

7/8. Excellent writing, Corinthian. There isn't anything to critique on my part, so I will just give you a job well done.

-- deadly_sinner66 (Score of 0)
7/28/2008 8:52:56 PM:

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