Celebrating Independence Day

by Leon101

Description

It's the fourth of July, and you, along with your family, get ready to go out to your cousin's to celebrate.

How your Independence Day goes, is up to you, in this short Holiday based story, with a total of four outcomes.

Happy reading!

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 2 - choking hazard for children under 4
Game Difficulty: 1 - no possible way to lose
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 8 ratings)
Played 37 times and finished 10 times since 7/5/2008

Comments

What was the point of this story again?

-- Conneth
8/5/2008 8:21:35 PM:

It was okay, I guess. There wasn't really much character development or plot, but I liked the simplicity of it. Rare to find a story like that that is actually worth reading anymore - well done. It was good.

-- October
7/10/2008 7:16:27 AM:

was that like, some kind of afterschool special?
(I learned that I should be as anti-social as possible, or I'll go blind.)

-- Corinthian
7/9/2008 2:06:16 PM:

It was okay, but I wish it had been longer. It's plot wasn't very exciting either. But at the very least you wrote it well, had proper spelling and punctuation. Your getting better.

-- SilverMan
7/8/2008 9:37:06 PM:

Your best work
Great Job Leon :D
IT was finished, well written
and alot of fun
I loved the style
Great story :)
(Finally, somewhere closer to your potential :D)

-- JJJ-thebanisher
7/6/2008 11:42:18 AM:

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